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getting kids to stop, observe and write

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how to get kids to stop, observe and write

Our Everyday Journal cards have proven to be a really incredibleโ€”and sneakyโ€”way of getting the kids focused and thinking in a way that Iโ€™m not sure theyโ€™d be willing to do otherwise.

Thereโ€™s something exciting about choosing a card, about having the topic be a surprise, and about being willing and open to trying something totally new.ย ย  Andย  Maddy, Owen, and Cora have each slowly discovered their favorite areas of focus with the cardsโ€”photo inspiration, nature inspiration, poem inspiration, techy inspiration, and artsy inspiration.

But one of our first topics involved nothing other than finding peace and quiet, and still it remains one of their top activities.

Hereโ€™s the skinny. . .

  • Getting Kids to Stop, Observe, and Write: The prompt was simple.ย  All it said was

Go outside and find a quiet spot.

Pick one thing that you can see and describe it the best way you know howโ€”how does it feel, smell, taste, sound, and look?

I said, Sounds simple, doesnโ€™t it? So youโ€™re going to find a quiet spotโ€”all to yourselfโ€”and then what are you going to do?

Maddy jumped in: Looks like weโ€™re just going to sit in a spot that we choose and pick something to write aboutโ€”like everything about it.

Right, I said. Youโ€™re going to use your five senses to write about what that thing looks like, how it feels, how it smells, how it tastesโ€”if itโ€™s safe to taste it!โ€”and how it sounds. Cool?

Like if I were going to sit here and observe this one blade of grass, I would write something like, โ€˜I am green, long like a string bean, but flat.ย  Iโ€™m thick at the bottom and get skinnier to a point at the top.ย  I have tiny lines on each side of me.ย  I am dancing gently in the wind, moving side to side.ย  Iโ€™m quiet—I donโ€™t make a sound.โ€™ย  I smell fresh and crisp right after Iโ€™m cut or picked, but I donโ€™t have a smell if Iโ€™m left alone. And how does it feel?

how to get kids to stop, observe and write

We began with a challenge–having our kids stop, observe, and write–and it got their creative juices flowin!

Some are soft and others are pokey, said Owen.

Youโ€™re right.ย  Very true.ย  But for this journal weโ€™re picking just oneโ€”and I know itโ€™s hardโ€”but one object to write about. So look at this piece of grass (I pointed to the grass by our feet) and tell me how it feels.

Itโ€™s soft and bendy when you walk on it but still a little pokey at the top, he said.

Okay, so Iโ€™d write something like, โ€˜Iโ€™m mostly very soft and smooth and bendy when stepped on but have a gentle pokey top.โ€™

Then for taste? Hmmmm.ย  How does a piece of grass taste? I asked.

It can taste grassy, said Cora.

Youโ€™re right. It tastes like grassโ€”letโ€™s try one. Anyone want to try to eat a piece of grass?

No one didโ€”which surprised meโ€”so we left that part go.how to get kids to stop, observe and write

Cora worked on her letters in her workbook–to her insistence–and that was cool with me.

So let me read what we have, and we can make sure we have all of the pieces before you go and do your own observation writing, okay? Listen closely for all of the sensesโ€”how it looks, feels, sounds, tastes, and smells–you think you have anything we should add, let me know.

I read it, and they said it sounded great and could they please please please go do theirs now?

So they did.ย  Off they ran to find a quiet spot in the yard to stop, observe, and write.

And though this activity was a bit above Coraโ€™s abilities, she did want to take her letter-writing practice book out to a quiet place in the yard to practice writing her letters.ย  I suggested she go out and choose one object to drawโ€”but she said she wanted to write.ย  And really, since this summer and itโ€™s all about fun with some learning stuck in, I let her go for it.

Maddy and Owen took longer than I thought, but they didnโ€™t write a whole lotโ€”another reason that modeling is so totally important.ย  Once they shared their pieces, we talked about whether or not they included all of the five senses, and both kids did not. So they re-read what we wrote together, went back to their spots, found their object, and did a bit of revising.

 

It was fun. And they really loved it, so much so that weโ€™ve done it several times this summer, even on days that they didnโ€™t choose the card.

It was a matter of finding what got my kids going–and interested in writing–that helped me here. Like Jolie Stekly, writing and literature expert and former classroom teacher says in her piece on Mom’s Homeroom called, The Writing’s on the Road, it’s all about finding little gems of opportunity to give our kids reason to write and at the same time to avoid that dreaded summer slide.

She encourages parents to “in the same way we sneak greens into our kids’ other foods โ€” like adding a few leaves of spinach into a fruit smoothie โ€” we can do the same with writing during the summer months”ย  She says that “summer travel and events (vacations, road trips, camping, day outings, summer camps) provide great opportunities to put your kids’ already-acquired writing skills to use in a meaningful way” and that they’ll see the writing as fun–not work.

I like that–simple and sneaky like spinach in a smoothie. So if my kids are game to write in the backyard, quiet and carefully, I’ll take it!ย  Happy writing!

 

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